Good FR
'What's cool about this girl? Qualify! If your not Kino-ing your not sarging!'
This Statement says it all.
In reading your FR the thing that stood out was kinoing, or lack thereof. Try doing any kinoing that is not too sexual and starting on the outside of her body (shoulders, upper arm... and escalating in over time)
I love kinoing it's my specialty I'd say;-)
The weirdness goes away with practice, especially for day game. At first my day game was WEAK, even weaker than my not especially good club game at first.
You hit the nail on the head about girls picking up on your internal state more during the day with less distractions and your increased feelings of weirdness. As you practice you will get more and more comfortable with being watched by spectators (it becomes fun and amusing), talking to girls anywhere (you will be comfortable, so they will be also) and kinoing (I'm still astounded how much kino and how sexual of kino you can do when it's done casually and comfortably).
'What's cool about this girl? Qualify! If your not Kino-ing your not sarging!'
Keep this in mind and it will take you far, honestly it isn't everything, but more advanced stuff doesn't come into it until you gain the comfort of USING qualification and kino well. You have to get them to want to stay long enough to get into comfort, bounce them, time bridge them, do some framing...
This was a good FR because you identified what you need to practice.
da vinci